I’ve just looked at this blog’s stats for the past 12 months, and this post on backstory (kill it) is by far the most popular post. I’m not surprised. When you’re writing fiction, backstory is a challenge for new authors.
To reiterate from that post:
Resist the Impulse to Explain
New writers start off great. They get the woman in the trunk of the car (or create some other hot action which starts things off.) Then they feel they need to explain who the woman is, and how she landed in the trunk of a car. They go on for pages and pages. RESIST! Please do not do this.
How to manage backstory: remove it when you’re editing
Important… Don’t worry about backstory in your first draft. Just write.
Remove ALL backstory when you’re editing.
You can add backstory into your novel/ novella/ short story, very carefully after your “slash and burn” editing fury. Restrain yourself. Only a sentence or two at a time. And only if you must add it for the story to make sense.
Here’s what a new author’s backstory hell looks like
I work with lots of writing students, so I may be more sensitive to backstory hell than most.
Here’s a common problem I see — messed-up scenes.
Not only does the new author cram backstory into a scene until the scene’s mangled beyond repair… he crams yet more backstory into the backstory.
Here’s what that looks like:
- the scene starts. You settle down for an enjoyable scene between two characters, then the author inserts…
- backstory 1, of one of the characters…
- in the middle of backstory 1, you get backstory 2, the backstory of the other character…
- Finally the author remembers he’s writing a scene. So you get a snippet of the scene (by this time the reader’s head is spinning like a top). After just a few paragraphs of the scene, the author inserts…
- something or other, which may be backstory, or maybe it’s a flashback, who knows?
Sadly, readers have long-since stopped reading.
Forget backstory, PLEASE
Just kill it wherever you find it.
Keep your story moving forward.
Write in scenes, remembering that a scene happens in the present moment, just like a movie scene. There’s no room for backstory in a scene.
I blame advice like “write a character bio” for backstory hell. As I said in Kill Your Backstory:
If you’ve been happily creating character bios, and other junk, stop it. Who cares what flavor of ice cream your main character prefers?
The best way to create character bios is to do it while you’re writing. Yes, you need to remember that your main character’s eyes are brown, not blue, and that he lives with his Uncle Jake, who’s going out with Selma from the diner.
I copy and paste all this must-remember material into a single “characters” document in Scrivener. Then I open that document in Quick Ref while I’m writing the novel.
If you’ve been creating lengthy character bios before you start writing, STOP IT. Otherwise you’ll be tempted to insert all this junky material as backstory while you’re writing.
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