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Craft Fictional Characters For NaNoWriMo: 3 Tips

Craft Fictional Characters For NaNoWriMo: 3 Tips

Ready for NaNoWriMo? With just over a week to go, I hope that your preparation is proceeding steadily. One of the biggest challenges in writing a book in a month is creating appealing fictional characters. Since your characters create your plot, it’s worth thinking about your characters: primary characters as well as secondary.

To get a handle on your characters, start with the basics.

Vital: your fictional character’s basics: name, age, profession and primary attribute

I know some authors like to create page upon page of character bios, and that’s fine — although it’s never worked for me. I like to start with the basics, a fictional character’s name, his age, his profession, and his primary attribute.

Let’s say that we’re writing a cozy mystery, and we want to create a quirky sleuth. Without bending our brain, we decide on:

  • Name: Mara Mason, age 26
  • Profession: widow, who works from home, as a virtual assistant;
  • Primary attribute: intense curiosity.

These kinds of mini character bios take less than a minute to set up, and they give us a head start on our plot. Since her primary attribute is curiosity, we know that we need to show Mara’s curiosity several times in the Setup of our novel’s structure (the first few chapters.) We also know that her curiosity will create problems for Mara in the lead up to our novel’s climax — the final three chapters.

Once you’ve created several of these itty bitty bios for the main players in your novel, your plot starts to take shape. Your task now is to challenge your characters, so they reveal themselves, and kick along the plot.

Let’s look at three tips which will help.

1. Give a character the skill he needs: show how he acquired his skills

As you build your characters and your plot keep watching for things you need to foreshadow, and plant. By the time we’ve created another three or four characters for our cozy mystery for example, we’ve decided on the crime which Mara will investigate: it’s the murder of a prominent man in town. We also know that Mara will break into the house of the victim, and into the home of his mistress too. Mara believes that the police have arrested the wrong man.

House-breaking isn’t a common skill. We need to show how Mara acquired that skill, before she needs it. So we’ll set that up in an early chapter.

2. Show your hero’s dark side: everyone has a shadow

Are you a new author? New authors, and some established authors too, tend to create impossibly perfect main characters. No one is perfect. Give your characters faults. Not little faults, either. No one cares if your heroine is chronically late.

You need to create a major fault for each of your main characters if you want readers to remember the character. Consider Lizzie Bennet, in Pride and Prejudice. She falls for Wickham’s tale, and reads too much into the character of Mr Darcy from her cursory observations of him. Everyone loves Lizzie of course, so her prejudice — judging Darcy on little information — is forgiven and understood.

With our cozy mystery, we could turn Mara’s “curiosity” attribute into a major fault. Everyone has a shadow side, so perhaps Mara’s curiosity could be so strong that it’s almost pathological. The murderer recognizes this, and creates a trap for her.

You can turn almost any attribute into a flaw; just focus on the shadow side of the attribute.

Focusing on the shadow sides of your characters will help you to build your plot too, painlessly.

3. Get to know your character: write his journal

Building characters by playing around with descriptions, character attributes and flaws rarely makes your characters real to you. They’re paper dolls.

To make a character REAL to you, write a character’s journal, in the voice of that character. Writing character journals will not only make your characters much more real to you, it will grow your plot, too.

One point… be aware that you’re doing NaNoWriMo prep. 🙂 You can’t start writing your novel until November 1. I always find that when I’m writing character journals, it’s inspiring, and I want to work on my novel.

When you’ve got great fictional characters, you’ve got a readable novel

Readers read to experience. They want to meet interesting people, with whom they can identify, or not. When you follow our three tips, you’ll create characters readers will enjoy.

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Master Fiction Writing: Craft A Novel in 31 Days

Master Fiction Writing: Craft A Novel in 31 Days

Series: Selling Writer Strategies, Book 4
Genre: Writing
Tag: writing fiction

You want to write a novel. Perhaps you can't get started. Or maybe you got started, and then you stopped.You need a plan, broken down into easy steps. This program began as a 30-day challenge which I organized for readers in 2010. Hundreds of writers joined the challenge and completed it. They wrote novels.

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Writing Fiction And Getting Read: 4 Easy Tips

Writing Fiction And Getting Read: 4 Easy Tips

Not only is writing fiction fun, today it can be very profitable indeed. You don’t need to get your book onto any bestseller lists to make a nice income. All you need is ebooks which are read.

Readers in genres like romance are voracious. They’ll read everything you write, if your books excite them.

Get read, make money

Your aim in writing short stories and novels is to be read right through to the end, particularly if you enroll your ebooks in Amazon’s KDP Select. Enrolling in Select automatically makes your ebooks available to Kindle Unlimited subscribers. In KU, you’re paid for every page which readers read.

How do you get readers, and keep them reading? Let’s look at some tips.

1. Spend time on your hook — and keep up the suspense

Ideally your reader finds your hook so amazing that he must start reading… and can’t stop. A “hook” hooks readers’ attention. To keep readers reading, you need to embed your hook, and make sure that you keep hooking readers, right through the ebook.

Spend time studying the hooks in bestselling fiction. Your hook doesn’t need to be outrageous; just something which intrigues readers.

I just checked Amazon’s Top 100 bestsellers in Literature and Fiction. Currently the top ranked book is The Good Neighbor, by J.A. Banner.

From the description:

“Shadow Cove, Washington, is the kind of town everyone dreams about—quaint streets, lush forests, good neighbors. That’s what Sarah thinks as she settles into life with her new husband, Dr. Johnny McDonald.”

Can you see the hook? It takes just two sentences, and your curiosity is aroused. Simple as it is, it’s a hook which works.

2. Keep readers guessing, and surprise them in every scene

You know that readers hate info-dumping — that is, telling too much in an indigestible lump. Info dumps stop your story dead. And there’s a bigger problem with info dumps too. When you info dump, it’s like piling all your storytelling ammunition into a heap, and then ignoring it.

Information is valuable. Dole it out sparingly. Keep readers guessing, and see if you can embed a surprise in every scene.

3. Ensure that your main character has a problem he can’t ignore

Every popular short story and novel is the story of change in the main character, or characters. If there’s no change, readers stop reading. Your characters need to grow.

We’ve talked about character flaws. In your fiction, your characters must have flaws, and they must overcome them. Your main character’s flaw can’t be trivial. It needs to be crippling, so that if he doesn’t recognize the flaw, and overcome it, he’ll be destroyed.

Genre comes to your rescue here. Most genres have tropes, which give you your flaw. In historical romance, the hardened rake is a trope, with a built-in flaw. As Maya Rodale suggests, you can turn that trope on its head, and create a virgin hero.

4. Up the ante: make everything WORSE (or better)

If your readers aren’t reading, chances are that you’re letting your characters off too easy. Don’t do that. When you write a scene, ask yourself how you can make the character’s situation WORSE.

Let’s say that you’ve written a scene in which your main character loses his job. Well done — now make it worse. Not only does he lose his job, but he’s also arrested for fraud. His fiancee calls off the wedding.

While you’re busily making things worse, make sure that your character never, ever sees himself as a victim. Disaster brings out the best in him, not the worst. (Unless you’re writing a comedy.)

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Write Hot Scenes For Bestselling Fiction: 5 Magical Tips

Hot Scenes Deliver Bestselling Fiction: 5 Magical Tips

New authors struggle with their scenes. They know that when you write powerful scenes, readers respond, and the result is bestselling fiction.

Bestselling authors are masters of their scenes. Their prose may be less than elegant, but it delivers an emotional punch. It’s always amusing when unsuccessful writers sneer at bestselling authors, whining that a certain bestselling author “can’t write” and doesn’t “deserve” success. This is nonsense.

As I’ve said many times: let go of the words in your fiction. Focus on FEELING.

If you focus on emotions, literary snobs may sneer, but you can laugh all the way to the proverbial bank. Emotion is delivered in scenes: the action’s happening now, and readers are engaged.

One of the biggest challenges for new authors is getting a handle on scenes. So, let’s do that today.

Scenes are the building blocks of your fiction

In the 21st century, every reader understands drama.

TV and movie stories are delivered in scenes. If you want lots of readers, you need to learn to deliver your stories in scenes too.

Readers are impatient. They just want the story. Deliver. Show, rather than tell. “Showing” means writing in scenes.

Here’s a graphic to help you to write hot scenes.

How to Write Scenes in Novels and Short Stories

Now let’s look at the elements which make up a scene.

Scene elements: how to set a scene

Here are the five elements of a hot scene.

1. Where and when, time and place: a scene plays out, NOW

Scenes are set somewhere. On a beach. In a warehouse. In a penthouse apartment. On a train… a plane… in a car.

Think of each of your scenes as a scene in a movie. Your point of view (POV) character in your scene is your camera. Orient your readers, so that they know where they are, and with whom they’re there.

Please don’t stop the action to do this. Use sensory elements (see below) to establish your scenes.

2. Characters have goals

Every character in your scene has a goal. And a secret. We all want things, all the time. Your fictional characters ACT on their goals. Their actions lead to conflict with other characters.

3. Character goals lead to: action, conflict, suspense… DRAMA

It’s often easier to study scenes while watching a movie. There’s less chance you’ll get lost in the words. So watch a movie, with a pen and paper. Pause the action when a scene ends, and replay the scene. Analyze it.

Work out what the characters’ goals are in the scene.

4. Sensory elements: sight, sound, hearing, touch: your readers LIVE your scenes

Ground your scenes in reality. What does your POV character hear? What’s he touching? Provide sensory details, so that readers can live the scenes with your characters.

5. Emotion, via characters’ thoughts, to help readers to FEEL

Consider this sentence.

He told her: “You deserve to die.”

Dramatic? Not unless your POV character thinks, and reacts. Reveal your POV character’s thoughts when he hears the statement. If you can do that, your readers will live the scene with the character. They’ll  be there with him.

Fence in your scenes…

Unfortunately, it’s all too easy to dilute the effect of a scene, and wander off the point. Write down one, and at the most three, things you want a reader to experience in a scene.

This means:

  • NO flashbacks during a scene;
  • No extraneous characters (limit the characters in most scenes. Battle and crowd scenes are the exception. Maintain the POV’s character’s focus. What’s he seeing and doing? Feeling? Thinking?)
  • NO tangents. Maintain your POV character’s focus. Let’s say that your POV character has been kidnapped. He’s unlikely to think about a dinner party that’s coming up in three days. New authors go off on strange tangents in scenes all the time. DON’T. Be there with your character, thinking what he’s thinking, and feeling it.
  • NO head-hopping: one POV per scene. Many bestselling authors head-hop. (That is, they change their POV character in the course of a scene.) You can do it too, once you’re a bestseller. It’s all too easy to confuse readers, so don’t do it until you’re selling thousands of copies of your fiction every day.

Writing hot scenes will become second nature to you

Initially, you’ll feel as if there’s a lot to remember in scenes. Over time, you won’t need to think about the elements. Adding them becomes natural, and automatic.

Enjoy writing scenes. Hot scenes are the building blocks of bestselling fiction — they’re entertaining to write, as well as to read. Have fun. 🙂

Blurbs Sell Your Books: Craft Irresistible Blurbs, And Sell More Fiction And Nonfiction Today

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Step By Step To Fiction Which Sells: Plotting And Scene Magic

Step By Step To Fiction Which Sells: Plotting And Scene Magic

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Your readers want to enter your novel's world. They want to experience your book -- they want to live your book with your main characters.

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